CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-29-2014 4:31 PMMuldoon put the pedal to the medal. The jeep was in no condition to drive fast, but the raptors were closing in fast. They could run cheetah speed and the best the jeep could do was 35 mph. One of the raptors jumped and landed on the top of the jeep. "Grab the wheel Muldoon told Wu ." He climbed in the front and Muldoon opened the sun roof. The raptor was struggling to get a balance and Muldoon fired his shotgun at it. The raptor fell back and two others started eating it leaving three raptors chasing the jeep. One charged through the back window and managed to get a grip. Nedry,Wu,and Jess screamed."Get out of the way" Muldoon screamed. He shot the raptor and killed it. Two more to go. Another raptor tried bumping the jeep and Wu turned the jeep and squashed the raptor into a tree. Finally the raptors gave up leaving the alpha and two others.
The jeep continued on for a few minutes and then the engine started smoking. The jeep would no longer move and slowly came to a stop. "What the hell do we do now?" Asked Nedry. "I think I can fix it depending on the problem." Said Muldoon. He opened the hood and waved the gas out of the way. The jeep just had a loose fan belt and Muldoon attacked it. " Try the engine." Muldoon yelled to Wu. He tried it, but nothing worked. "Try again Muldoon" Muldoon yelled, but he was interrupted by a roar. Muldoon looked around and saw nothing. Then, something lifted up the jeep. Muldoon could just make out an outline of the dinosaur. The male Carnotaurus was shaking the jeep in its tiny jaws. "It's a damn chameleon." Then the jeep dropped and Wu started the engine. Muldoon tried firing his gun but it was jammed. He did the only thing he could do. He jumped into the jeep and tried to floor it, but the jeep wouldn't budge. The Carno had a good grip. It slowly made its way into the jeep snapping at whoever it could get to. Muldoon thought he was doomed.
This was the end. That's when he heard a familiar sound. The tour jeep from earlier and another one following it passed by. "We need to run to the jeep." Muldoon picked up Ricks AR and shot the Carno it the snout. Gerry quickly grabbed the things from the trunk and the hoped out and ran to the jeep in the best condition. The carno was trying to get its head out of the jeep. Those tiny arms didn't help and it's head was to small for it to shift the weight if the jeep to get itself out. It roared and struggled but the group was already a mile away. The narration on the tour car told that they where nearing the Baryonyx exhibit. "Where almost their" Muldoon said with exhaustion.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-29-2014 4:57 PMGood Chapter, looking forward to the next.
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Nice chapter, same here
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-30-2014 4:28 PMWell done. Liked the Carnotaurus part :)
