CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 11:38 AMHello everybody! I will be starting a new fan fiction called Jurassic Park survivors a story about the people left behind on Isla Nublar. Thank you for reading and so hope you enjoy.
Muldoon awoke to the sound of a helicopter. He looked up and could barley make out the InGen logo in the side. Sattler must have gotten the power back on and everyone escaped. He had no memory of what happened after the raptor attacked but he looked okay. Surprisingly well in almost great shape except for the few cuts and the small gash in his left thigh. He wondered how he was still alive. Then he saw a half eaten raptor carcass a few feet away from him. "What the hell happened?" He asked himself. Then he noticed little green dinosaurs the size of chickens eating at the carcass. They were almost like land piranhas. He recognized them as Compsognathus, but he'd only seen them on site B. "How did they get here." Even though their were many he knew they couldn't have killed the raptor. He looked down and found his shotgun and then noticed footprints bigger than the Baryonyx, but smaller than the T-rex. He picked up his gun and decided to get the hell out of their before the owner if the foot prints showed up.
The jungle was a pain in the ass. The jungle was dense and their where many boulders to climb over. His leg was throbbing as he struggled to move on. Then something huge castes a shadow over head and Muldoon saw about three pteranodons flying over the jungle. "What else has John been hiding?" Their where two maybe three new species he wasnt told about. He finally stopped on tour road at what looked like the Dilophosaur exibit. Their was a blue light coming from inside the exibit so he decided to check it out. He climbed through a non electrified portion of the fence and headed into the jungle.
As he walked he heard hooting noise from the distance. He fired his shotgun in the air as a warning shot and the hooting ended. He finally came to the source which was the missing gas powered jeep. It was stuck on a hill. He climbed up and found an imprint of a heavy set man in the mud. Maybe it was Nedry he thought he wondered where that fat slob ended up. Their was another imprint in the ground of what looked like a can. He followed the imprint and found a Barbasol shaving cream can. What the hell was this doing all the way out here. Then the top turned a bit and Muldoon turned it all the way. Inside was what looked like dinosaur embryos. In fact all fifteen species in the island where in their. He slipped it in his pocket to examine it when it was safe and headed back up to the jeep. He opened the door to find a huge mess. Candy wrappers all over the floor. Dilophosaur spit and blood on the windows a yellow jurassic park jacket covered in spit, and a dead Dilophosaurus in the front seat. The worst thing of all was that fat slob Nedry in the back seat snoring away.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 11:39 AMSorry I forgot to add that most of the chapters won't be this long this is just the intro to the story.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-22-2014 11:41 AMWhat did Nedry do? Eat the Dilophosaurus? Haha, nice start, and that's fine if not all of them are this long.
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CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 11:47 AMGood one Mr Happy what Nedry did will be revealed in the next chapter tommorow.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-22-2014 11:53 AMLooking forward to the whole story.
Just out of curiosity, I noticed what you said in my one chapter and PM'd you. Did that help or did you figure it out yourself? Just wondering because I never got a message back.
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Nice intro. Looking forward to the rest.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 12:13 PMSorry Mr Happy i never got the message I am still figuring things out. Anyway I did figure it out on my own but thank you anyway. Also I love your Terrence stories keep up the good work
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Tyrannosaurus RexMember5639 XPMar-22-2014 12:17 PMAh, Muldoon. Loved him from the original book. I've a great amount of dislike for the fact they felt it necessary for him to die in the movie. Two Raptors? Come now; the Muldoon from the book would have wrestled that brat down right as she stuck her head through the fronds - but not before speaking in the absolutely delightful voice I imagined him having. Something classy, like James Bond - "Hello there, darling. I'm more than happy to dance with you and your friend over there by the snake..."Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-22-2014 12:21 PMBook Muldoon would have kicked Raptor ass in the movie. I would have loved for Muldoon to have survived. I actually heard that there were plans for Muldoon to be in Jurassic World, but Bob Peck unfortunately died.
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CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 12:24 PMYeah I guess Steven and Michael didn't want him to live, but if anything I would have rather had muldoon survive than Hammond but if that happened their might not have been a Jurassic Park 2 or 3 or even Jurassic World.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Tyrannosaurus RexMember5639 XPMar-22-2014 12:50 PMOh, no! Robert died?! How terrible! I didn't think he was that old or in poor health. What happened?Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-22-2014 1:12 PMCancer got him in August 1999. He was in his fifties.
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CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 1:18 PMPretty good. Lookng foward to the rest.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Tyrannosaurus RexMember5639 XPMar-22-2014 1:22 PMThanks for that information, MR.HAPPY9097. As for for the Muldoon from the book: you're absolutely right; he would have delvered quite a sound thrashing to the raptors - and then have a martini.Tyrannosaurus RexMember6270 XPMar-22-2014 1:26 PMYou're welcome. I actually came across a video on YouTube that was a tribute to Peck and made a topic.
Link to Bob Peck Tribute discussion
It goes to the topic, and a link is provided to the video from there.
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Tyrannosaurus RexMember5639 XPMar-22-2014 2:03 PMThanks, sweetheart. I'll have a roll of tissues on standby for when I watch. :)
CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 3:11 PMVery sad indeed, and I believe both canon Muldoons would've beat the hell out of the raptor, if he hadn't been caught in surprise. But raptors arent quite wimps either. So sad, though he was so young.
Back on topic, Great chapter, this'll be a good story. And I can already tell the dinosaur that killed the raptor will be your namesake JP carnotaur. :)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
CompsognathusMember0 XPMar-22-2014 4:16 PMWhen will he next chapter be?
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
CompsognathusMember1 XPMar-28-2014 1:09 AMThe guy who played Roland Tembo, Pete Postlewaith, died too, on Jan 2, 2011. That was just three days before my birthday. :(
Youre fat, and I'm not sugarcoating it cause you'd probably eat that too.
